Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Saturday, February 11, 2017

Wikipedia Trail: From Davey to Cullden

Shaun Davey: 2011
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Shaun Davey  was born in 1949 in Bellfast. He is a composer who specializes in large scale concerts. He has four major works The Brendan Voyage, The Pilgrim, Granuaile, and The Relief of Derry, all of which are based on Irish History. One of his other works May We Never Have to Say Goodbye was played at the opening ceremony for the special Olympics world summer games in 2003. He helped compose the soundtrack for the movie The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe. It should also be The Deer's Cry, was played during the Inauguration of the Irish president. Davy is important in the musical world because he was the first composer to incorporate native instruments, like the bagpipes into his compositions and orchestra.
noted that his one of his works

One of Davey's most popular compositions, the Relief of Derry Symphony, was based of a real historic event, the Siege of Derry. This siege was the first major event in the Willimate War.  The Siege began in April 1689 and ended July 30 of the same year. Derry was targeted because of its clear allegiance against the, then current, king of England. By the time the siege was over many of the people inside the walls were starving to death. Some were hallucinating, a scene that is captured in Davey's 4th movement, as a woman sings about the sights from the eyes of the soldiers. By the time the siege broke over 4,000 people had died within the walls.

The Williamite War as a conflict between the Jacobites and the Willimates, or those that supported a Catholic King (James II) or a Protestant King ( William of Orange, and current King) for the monarchy of England, and thus Scotland and Ireland. This war is what finally confirmed British Protestant rule over Ireland. The war lasted from March 12, 1689 to October 3, 1691.

Some of the Jacoites from the Williamite War participated in the Battle of Cullden. This was the final battle of the Jacobite rising in 1745 and took place April 16, 1746. The battle itself took less then and hour, but it ended with over 1,500 Scotts dead and only 50 deaths for the British. The rising itself was  a religious and political civil war between Britain and Scotland, Ireland had some support for Scotland but was severely hindered by the previous war. As a result of the war, much of the highlanders were wiped out and their culture was almost annihilated, such as the banning of traditional highland dress. The Jacobite uprising was the final uprising in the highlands. The defeat at Cullden solidified British rule over Scotland.

To be honest the only reason I started this search is because The Relief of Derry is one of my favorite "songs" to listen to. It is a truly beautiful piece. I felt like informing others about it and the history behind it. There are four movements, but I have only posted the first here. I encourage you to go and listen to the entire composition, it is truly moving.



Saturday, February 4, 2017

Reading Notes: Arabian Nights, Part B

Plot twist: make Aladdin a girl who is hardworking and clever. Instead of being taken advantage of she tricks other people into giving/doing things for her. So she recognized the false magician and manipulates him into giving her gifts and treasures.

Instead of being trapped in the cave she gets out easily, without the help of the genie, and is intelligent and brave rather then a coward.

She uses the genies powers to help others and catches the attention of the sultan who asks that she come visit him and his"son".
I am torn between them wooing her into marriage, and she forces them to do many great deeds or them rape her because of her beauty and revenge.

Think I will go on the wooing route, where they have to bring her many gifts within a certain period of time: 40 basins of gold and jewels, with 80 well dressed slaves. Essentially she makes them give her all their riches with out their knowledge. While doing this she wins over the heart of the people an soldiers, turning them away from the sultan.

The Magician does not come back to steal the lamp because she had paid him retribution for his previous loss, knowing it was a good thing to have him on her side rather then against her and knowing a magician is a good thing to have in ones back pocket.

Basically turn Aladdin into an intelligent girl who knows how to get what she wants. Someone who knows how to watch and learn, a patient huntress who thinks off all the angles before acting.

Bibliography-  Arabian Nights from Arabian Nights Entertainments, Online Reading
Desert Warrior by ravven78
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Feedback Focus: Know Thine self

Straight off, the second strategy, copy and delete, worked the best for me. It felt felt more natural and was easier for me to do compared to the others. The first strategy, while good in theory, actually distracted me more then anything. I ended up focusing more on my cadence and flow then on what I was reading. I do a similar strategy for when I am reading dialogue or a particularly confusing area but not for the entire story. The third strategy was was horrible for me. It felt forced. I read the story, read the author's note, and read the story again. Usually by then I would be taking notes of what I had noticed, liked or disliked, but, perhaps it was me misreading the assignment, I felt like this strategy did not let me do that. I ended up reading the same sentence over and over, and story began to blur and lost all its meaning to me, what I had in mind for commenting slipped away. It was entirely counterproductive.

The second strategy was very similar to what I already do when reading stories. I take notes on paper as I read. I jot down things that jump out to me, questions that occur, or general commentary that comes to mind. The difference is I take notes as I read, with the second strategy I had to wait until the end of the paragraph, not that big of a change. However, deleting the previous paragraph was distracting and goes against my previous patterns, as sometime I would reread previous paragraphs if the current one con, and the action itself drew me out of my focus.
I think I will continue to use my current strategy of writing down thoughts as I read and reading aloud as I need to. Out of the stories I read, I really enjoyed What Makes the Lightning.

Calvin an Hobbes by Bill Watterson
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Wednesday, February 1, 2017

Storytelling Week 4: In Umbra Sanitatis

Warning: Do not read this if you are squeamish or disturbed by dark themes

in·san·i·ty: noun - the state of being seriously mentally ill; madness.

How did it come to this?

The people here were nice. They had been kind to him after his ordeals. Strengthened and nourished him after they had found him, weak and emaciated, still trembling from fear. He remained under their kindness for many days, lost in memories of men. Men who were not men, but monsters, of those who feasted upon the flesh of his brothers. He had chosen to say with these people, strangers, who had brought him back from the cusp of the abyss. He had aided them, taught them skills from his homeland, told them stories of his childhood and travels. Now, many months later, he was one of them, brought into this village by a wife. A beauty who was kind and soft. For him this was now home, a place of refuge and comfort from the torments of the world.

This was not how it was meant to be.

He had went to see his friend, who had lost his wife in childbirth. Going to give comfort as was the way of his old people. But his friend was unconscionable, rebuffing his kind words. Confused, he asked why his friend was so morose. In answer, his friend wailed the truth. No married couple went to the grave alone. His friend would be buried with his departed wife, alive. He watched as his friend was lowered into the catacombs alongside the body of his spouse. He watched as seven days worth of rations and many resplendent jewels were lowered down with the doomed man, and he feared for himself. Dread crept up his spine as he watched the village seal the mouth of the cave.

He went home, terrified and on edge, feeling as if death was grasping his shoulders and pulling him towards that forsaken tomb. Several years past, he remained skittish around the village. He could not leave. When he left to hunt people followed him as if they could smell his fear and would not allow him to flee. Everywhere he went someone accompanied him, like some guardian of the dammed. Then the unthinkable happened, his wife caught ill and perished.

What dreadful circumstance

They stood there watching him, waiting for him to break. Then, when he shattered and ran, they caught him. They dragged him terrified, screaming and thrashing, to that living crypt. They held him as he watched his wife be lowered into that chasm; as he watched the jewels and riches poured into that hole, as the food was placed into the crevice. Then they watched as he was placed upon that pallet and lowered into his tomb. Their cold eye followed him as he went bellow that final precipice, until he could see them no more. He watched as their shadows made demons upon the walls, heard as their voices mutated into a psalm for he dammed. He watched as the stone was moved to the mouth of the cavern. Then he was alone with no light to see but a small touch, about to be burned away entirely.

Trapped in the land of the dead.

He did not know how long he had been there. He was out of food and was running low on water. Already, he was more of a wraith then a man. He was a mad man, talking to the shadows. He had entire conversations with the the dead as his captivated audience, but the dead were not supposed to talk back. The smell alone was enough to drive someone to hysteria, the sweet stench of rotting flesh, that sickly fragrant aroma. The darkness was worse. It put visions in his mind, a none existent flicker of firelight, a touch or a wispier of a passing man, a shade from the beyond. He was living, but living as if he were dead.

Suddenly, there was light in his dark world, the rock had been moved from the lip of the crypt. A new death, the next unfortunate soul, was being brought to the cave. Then he smiled. Here was life, sustenance. He waited as the body was lowed. Hid as the gems were deposited. Prowled in the shadows, waiting as the new sacrifice was deposited into his cave. When the stone was once again rolled into place he struck, catching the young woman on the head with a femur. She fell, dazed. Then, he dragged a sharp stone across her neck, killing her. He hesitated, here was meat, warm and fresh. Then, like the wild men who had eaten his brothers before, he descended and ate upon her flesh. As he waited for his next meal, he took the bones and decorated his new kingdom, caught up in his madness. Soon, yet another was lowed into his grasp and yet again he tore into the man.

Never before had insanity tasted so sweet.


Catacombes by Spex84
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Author's Note- There is a lot of this story that I kept true to the original. This story is based off of Sinbad's Fourth Voyage. This if the only voyage where Sinbad had his own ship and this particular voyage caught up in a bad storm and wrecked. Sinbad did actually encounter a tribe of cannibals and was able to escape by starving himself. Then he was rescued by another tribe and married one of their women. As in this story he was buried with the dead body of his wife, as was the custom of the tribe, along side jewels and a weeks worth of food. Similarly, Sinbad did kill the next person to be put down in the hole. However, unlike my story he did not eat her. Also, unlike my version, Sinbad eventually escapes and makes his way home. Whereas mine stays in his 'kingdom'. What I really wanted to show is just how much strain all these event would have put on Sinbad, and write a story where he broke under it. When exactly he broke I will leave up to you. I do apologize for the morbidity but the story ended up writing itself.

Biblography- Voyages of Sindbad by Andrew Lang, Online Reading

Monday, January 30, 2017

Reading Notes: Voyages of Sinbad, Part B

5th Voyage
The old man that Sinbad meets is Death, he is trying to judge 1. if Sinbad should die 2. where should he go if he does die. 1st task is he kind, 2nd is he strong, 3rd is he clever, 4th making up for past wrongs. Sinbad failed or passes? Pass goes on to live a long life. Fail-rest of his life is a dream that h never got to have.
I would have to change the story to make it more of a challenge then a inflicted pain. Change perceptions and reasons behind character actions and remove Sinbad's bad attitude.

6th Voyage
Sinbad is addicted to danger and is greedy for wealth. He cannot resist a new challenge. This one would be Sinbad thoughts as he embarks on a new adventure. His fears and desires. Brief backstories on previous adventures and the glories they have brought him followed by his wishes for a new quest. Does Sinbad have family? Why did he choose this new destination rather then familiar seas? Does he know those who he is about to travel with? Is it the adventure, the adrenaline, the discovery, the death that draw him back to danger? How long has it been since his last voyage?


Pile of Elephant Tusks
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Bibliography- Voyages of Sindbad by Andrew Lang, Online Reading

Reading Notes:Voyages of Sindbad, Part A

1st Voyage
What woke up this sleeping whale? How long had it been there? Why was there a forest growing on the back of it? Could I turn this whale into some sort of sea deity who gives refuge to lost sailors but this particular batch did something to anger him so he decided to drown them? Whale point of view or Sindbad, or perhaps some trusting sailor who drowns.
If from the whales perspective it would be fascinating to hear its story, from it young life to its long slumber, the why and hows to how it got to be where it was.
If from the poor unfortunate sailor. Definitely show that Sinbad refuses to give him a hand. Describe the other worldliness of the "island", its enchanting feel.

2nd Voyage
Perhaps the crew left Sinbad on purpose, putting sleeping drugs in his drink-would have to explain how and why they did so. Sinbad is a braggart and thinks of himself to highly? Ending would be leaving Sinbad on the island.
 For ironies sake - the Roc eats Sinbad. So the story would be from his perspective tied to the meat. We would here how he arrived, and lived the day in the valley hiding from the snakes, how he plotted to take the diamonds and get a ride to freedom. Then just as he is about to be free-plot twist. One of the birds eats him thus ending his journeys.

4th Voyage
It would be so interesting to document Sinbad decent into insanity. Starting from the death of his friend -he gets increasingly paranoid. To the death of his wife-frantic,tries to run and is caught. To witnessing  his own funeral-tied down,guards. To the macabre cavern- conversations with the dead talking to a wall, the smell. To complete inhumanity- killing other people(maybe eating them to).
Mother Island by Thiago Neumann
Behance
Bibliography- Voyages of Sindbad by Andrew Lang, Online Reading