Monday, April 17, 2017

Reading Notes: Dante's Inferno, Part A

Dark Wood and the Hill
It would be so interesting to describe this scene in detail
  • dark, dense
  • wild
  • reeking of fear and uncertainty
It wold be interesting to see what it is like for Dante to step out from the woods into the light--describe the light and the utter feeling of being made insignificant in the grand scheme of things when he sees the light at the top of the hill when he exits the woods
--mostly an introspective piece emotive and writing style to reflect that ie. very descriptive
perhaps include some poetry between the lines-- from Inferno or Inviticus?

Limbo
in study focus on the virtuous heathens
  • walking through the darkness into a brightly lit realm
  • describe it at first sight-elysian fields
  • include an explanation of who is there
  • end with comments about how this is still hell, even if it does not look like it
    • trapped knowing that this place is not heaven 
  • make it become apparent that though not punished no one is exactly happy with their circumstance 
    • Virgil,  Homer, Ceaser, Aeneas, Aristotle, Orpheus, Plato

Fariytail Forest by YoBarte (Johannes)
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Bibliography
: Dante's Inferno translated by Tony Kline: Source



Reading Notes: Dante's Inferno, Part B

The Suicides
I just relly want to describe this scene in vivid detail.
  • stunted trees
  • warped branches
  • desolate landscape
  • bleeding when plucked and able to scream only when injured
bring in Dantes utter desolation-Mabey a thought about how that could have been him all too easily-tragically beautiful, or horrendous awe-inspiring?
include quotes from cutters lullaby?
I want to write it so there is sympathy, not condemnation- make it clear why it is a sin though and not an excusable (relatable but refusal-message of hope?)

Ninth Circle

would be fascinating to describe this
  • bitter cold
  • walking through a field of heads sprouting from a lake of ice
  • seeing the contorted bodies-frostbitten?
  • eerie stillness and oppressive feeling
  • seeing the bodies frozen beneath the ice
  • and of corse seeing lucifer
  • highlight tragic figure of the fall or inhuman beast??
Dante's Inferno by Xr0ntnEm (taimur)
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Bibliography
: Dante's Inferno translated by Tony Kline: Source

Wednesday, April 12, 2017

Storytelling: Long Live the King



Diary of Queen Guinevere
The 3rd day of March of the year 537
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The King is dead.

I should go on to narrate all of his good deeds. Perhaps relate his good will and generosity or of the battles and deeds he had accomplished over the course of the long and fruitful life. But that would be a lie. He was not noble or kingly. He was a tyrant. The kingdom would surly have fallen if not for the efforts of the council and myself. I am sure, however, that there are people out there already writing records of his greatness. No. I refuse to let my husband, if I must call him that, be known as a noble king.

Let it be known that Arthur Pendragon, son of Uther, was a coward and a ruin to the kingdom.

Never before was there such a man who was more interested in the bottom of a keg then in the affairs of his own house. If there was a time he was coherent, servants would cower in the alcoves to avoid his wrath. Knight would avoid his rooms so that they would not be accused of treason for the lack of ale. Not that he was any kinder when he had been drinking, simply more tolerable and easily avoided.

Every night he would have a different woman in his bed. Sometimes they were servant girls, sometimes women from the village. But more often they were the wives and daughters of the nights and nobility. None of them could refuse him, for if they did they, and often their entire families, would be found the next morning dead and mutilated. If one happened to fall pregnant from his advances he would take her into the palace. Then he would proceed to pamper her and ensure her health. But, as soon as the child was born, not a minute after the first cry, the woman would be gone, left to fend for herself. If the babe was a girl, she would be left outside the city walls, a son would be raised in the castle. I myself am not free from this. Arthur had seen my beauty once, when visiting my father. He came back a week later and killed my entire family and forced me to wed him. I have lost many children to his cruelty. He also took his sister, Morganna, claiming her beauty was overwhelming and had enchanted him. Though he did not know it, she fell pregnant. The council and I helped her flee before the king could tell. She gave birth to young Mordred. He is now the saving grace of our kingdom.

He did more to damm the kingdom then spending all his money on liquor, luxury, and women. Our land is one that thrives on magic and Arthur took pleaser in wiping that magic out. He ordered hunts to slaughter herds of unicorns, the fay folk, dragons, and so many more. He ordered the execution of Merlin and Morgan Le Fay (who was also his sister), saying that they practiced arts that were bringing destruction to the kingdom.

It is safe to say that no one in the kingdom will be sad when news spread further beyond the walls of Camelot.

Eventually, his bustard son, Mordred, challenged Arthur on the battlefield. They fought for a very long time. In the end both struck each other through the gut with their swords, a treatable wound if acted upon quickly enough. We knowable in the healing art rushed to Mordred. We had heard from his mother that he was a worthy heir to the throne. We left Arthur there on the ground.

Now I will end this by saying this.

Long live the king

Sometimes going analogue is the
only way to go by Tobias Vemmenby
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Bibliography: Death of king Arther-King Arthur; Tales of the Round Table by Andrew Lang, source

Author's Note- I truly do not know where this came from. I was reading about King Arthur and thought--as I was reading about his death-- what if history got it wrong. What if Mordred was the good guy and Arthur was a really nasty one? Somehow this rush job came to be. I apologize. I know its not my best work. 

Tuesday, April 11, 2017

Reading Notes: King Arthur, Part B


Long Live the King 
Okay...Morbid time. Diary style. Mordred becomes king..written by view of Morganna (?) or Queen Guinevere. Every one celebrates that Arthur is dead- because they all hated him. He was a tyrant, temperamental and arrogant, was running the kingdom. I want the diary to be a reflection filled with resentment and hate. Detailing his atrocity-maybe he killed Merlin, dragons,unicorns, knights, paupers. I want it to be abundant clear that everyone is happy his is dead.  Begin with the lines the King is dead...end with long live the king. Question: dies in battle,both wounded but everyone rushes to the aid of Mordred, poisoned? The tales of the kings funeral are acutely of Mordred not Arthur-history has twisted it. 

End of Arthur
I want this one to be nice. But I do want to change the original story, just a bit. 
Arthur dies, but Bedivere has to drag his body to the lake because it was the dying wish of the king. I want to write how Bedivere got the body to the lake. Highlighting the fact of the dead body, the environment, desperation and urgency of Bedivere. Ending right as he reaches the lake and seeing the congregation waiting. End with a poem or song lyrics as the kings body is set in the raft. mood: bittersweet, genuine love for the king and regret for his death. 

The Death of a King by Elentori
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Bibliography: King Arthur; Tales of the Round Table by Andrew Lang, source

Monday, April 10, 2017

Reading Notes: King Arthur, Part A

Drawing of the Sword
If they are not worthy the sword kills them. But I want to change it up more than that. No man is able to pull the sword. But a woman stands up-she is already married and has children. She is able to pull it out, but she reruns it saying she is happy with her life. Then another woman is able to release it. A young girl, not yet old enough to wed. She returns it saying that she is looking for more in life than royalty. A third woman pulls it out. An old hag who has many grandchildren and has been widow for many years, She too returns it saying that she has lived a good life and has no need of it. The community then asks what they should do/why they were able to pull it out. The women say give the sword to Arthur-The three women become the triple goddess and guide Arthur.

The Sword Excalibur
I think it would be interesting to write a story on how Excalibur was forged. I think it would be fascinating if a woman made it rather then a typical male blacksmith. She puts her heart and soul into forging it, It is a beautiful sword in its simplicity-no ornate decorations or pomades just a weapon designed for maximum efficiency. When the last blow is struck the lady dies-she is exaliber. Her husband does a similar process to forge the sheath for the sword- both die so that the weapon may live-life sacrifice to ensure its perfection and ablilites. The lady of the lake is the daughter of these two mettle smiths. The sword was forged on the lake-she is a lady of it because that is where she was born-her mother did not stop forging even for her birth.

Arthieran Knight by Charles Ernest Butler
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Bibliography: King Arthur; Tales of the Round Table by Andrew Lang, source  

Monday, April 3, 2017

Reading Notes: Celtic Fairy Tales, Part B

Beth Gellert
Nooo, I want the dog to live. Maybe a fairy could come out of the woodwork and stop the king from killing his dog. Freeze the king in time and show him his child safe from harm, hiding under the covers. When he his free form the spell the fay and dog are both rewarded handsomely. Then when the dog dies of old age it is buried with a monument. Or the dog kills a changeling child, as he knows it was not the kings true son then when the king, unaware of this happenstance goes to kill the dog a fey stays his hand and tells him the truth of the matter. only to return the king's son to him, and reward the dog with a long life and healthy decedents (or keeps the son because the king killed his loyal companion).
Sleepy Grayhound by Unspalsh
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Bibliography
: Celtic Fairy Tales by Josepth Jacobs: source

Reading Notes: Celtic Fairy Tales, Part A

Connla and the Fairy Maiden
It would be interesting to see what happens to dear Connnla after he leaves with the maiden. There are several ways I could make it go. He could go with her and arrive at a wonderful place with eternal gardens, fairy lights, a place of genuine beauty- That in itself would be fun to write, simply so I can do a description of its entrancing beauty. Or I could turn the Fariy into death-and she is really leading him into the underworld. In a similar track she could be luring him to his death- he gets there. Sees the gardens and other fairy folk. But instead of greeting him with a feast and merriment he would be the feast. Also, was he drugged, is he hallucinating, or completely lucid when he leaves. Do i want him to regret his choice and try to return home only to be stopped, is he trapped there or is he a willing guest? So many directions this one could go.

Shepherd of Myddvai
I want to write a story about her sons. she has three, I want the sons to reflect the three strikes upon their mother from the father.
The first son -blessed with his hands, or with animal but cursed with impatience
the second son- blessed with good at comforting others cursed with foresight
the third son- blessed with humor cursed with a quick temper
it would be interesting to see how their individual  blessings affect them as healers-how it both helps and hinders their abilities. Are they jealous of one another - each thinking the others have it better or are they happy with their own talents and help one another.

Healing of the Blind Man and Raising of Lazarus
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Bibliography: Celtic Fairy Tales by Josepth Jacobs: source


Saturday, April 1, 2017

Reading Notes: Metamorphoses III, Part B

Orpheus and Eurydice
Plot twist. Eurydice did not love Orpheus. She was the incarnation of Persephone and was in love with Hades.  But her earthly parents forced her to marry Orpheus, someone who was a 'known' spouse killer and abuser. He married women for their inheritance, got an heir, then killed them in 'accidents", to claim their fortune. Eurydice kills herself on her wedding night with Orpheus so that she can be with her true husband in the underworld. And also that she would remain faithful, no simi-legal coerced adultery. When Orpheus turns up in the underworld, Hades and Eurydice decide to torment him and punish him for his crimes- taunting him with the end being in reach but lost. They are the ones who convince the mycines to rend Orpheus to pieces (Mycines as the wraiths of past lovers?).

Adonis
Who killed Adonis? I am going to go with a team effort between Hephaestus and Ares. They are jealous that Aphrodite is spending so much time with Adonis instead of them. So, they put aside their resentment for each other and team up to kill the man.  Hephaestus creates a mechanical boar, and ares fills Adonis with so much arrogance and blood thirst  that he overlooks Aphrodite's warnings.

Atlanta and Hypodima
Noo, I want Atlanta to win the race. Let her be a strong independent and mindful woman-not some flighty  wench. It would be wonderful if she won the foot race, then because of her notoriety, Athena and Artemis quarrel over who gets to have her as a hand maiden. But Atlanta refuses to join either one out of petty means and finds a minor goddess to serve instead.

Eurydice by Sorskc
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Bibliography:  Ovid's Metamorphoses, translated by Tony Kline. Source

Wednesday, March 29, 2017

Storytelling Week 10: Edge of Civilization

“Papa?”

“Yes, my little splinter?”

“Why are we so different from other people?”

“What do you mean?”

“Well, we are always alone. Our uncles and us. And we don’t exactly live like others do… in villages and such. We are always on the move. And. Well. All the other people have more children, and mothers, and wives, but it is just me and you guys. And none of you have wives, and I don’t have a mom. And then they talk about us and stare. And, and, and.”

“Hush, little splinter,” the man interrupted the child “Do not worry about it. We were chosen, that is all, you especially are a gift from the goddess. Do not fret about what the rabble are whispering about in the shadows, they simply do not understand.”

“But father, I don’t understand either”

“And it is not yet time for you to. I will tell you when you are ready. That is if you don’t figure it out yourself by then.”

He remembered the day the goddesses had blessed him with this innocent soul. He and his fellow druids were wondering about the wilds, communing with the goddess, when he was scraped on the leg by a thorn. He was in agony for months afterword. His leg had swollen so much that that he was unable to move about without aid. One day the healer among them took a spear head and sliced open the side of his leg to relieve the pressure. And from the wound had spilled the child. A beautiful girl, a gift to the men of the troop who would never marry. She was their darling and treasure, the legacy of an old forgotten religion.
“Father?”

“Yes, my splinter?”

“Why am I so different?”

“What do you mean, child?”

“I mean. I am half wild. Do not deny it. I know you take great pride in it. I can see it in your face.

I also see the men in the tribes we pass through. They stare at me with lust in their eyes, but none of them dare approach me because I scare them with my beauty and savageness. I can see the fear and dislike in the eyes of the women and elders. The curiosity in the children who are hidden in the skirts of their mothers.

It is more than just the looks. I know things that others do not. The way I live in woods, hunting and living with the animals. It goes beyond, even what you and my uncles do. And I don’t know how to explain it. It is like there is something in me that just can’t be changed.”

“Child, do not worry about it. I have told you many times of how the goddess gave you to me. That spirt you feel is a gift from them. It is not something to be ashamed of. Embrace it. It is perfectly okay for you to be like that. The only people who it should bother already understand.

Or is me and your uncles not enough for you?”

“Father, you know the answer to that. You guys are enough.

Besides, even if I wanted to be like all the other people, I don’t think I could stay among them. There will always be something just off enough that I would never quite fit in. I would always be an outcast”

“Does it matter? If you are happy where you are, stay there, if not go where you wish. You are not bound by the lives of normal men. You are blessed to be whatever you wish.”

The man watched as the child grew from an innocent babe into a fierce and beautiful woman. He taught her how to use the bow and spear. How to shape knives and hunt animals. How to live on the edge of civilization. He was there in the shadows as she talked with the wolves and the trees. He watched as she communed with the streams and stones of the wild. She grew quickly. She learned everything he and the other men had to teach, and then proceeded to either prove them wrong or teach them more as she grew. Her hunger for knowledge was insatiable and her love for the wilds uncontrollable.
“Father?”

“Humm?”

“I killed a man today.”

“Oh? And why did you kill this man? I assume there was a reason.”

“It was an accident. I think. I mean. I did not mean to kill him, not really.

He was trying to take me. He saw me and all he saw was a woman to state his desires. He grabbed me. And tore at my clothes. He was trying to violate me, and then probably justify marrying me by saying no man would want damaged goods.

And I was scared, but more than that, I was angry.

So, when he threw me to ground, I grabbed a rock and bashed it against his head. Then in my anger, I grabbed his knife and plunged it into his chest.”

“Oh, my splinter. You did the right thing”

“I know that.”

“Then why are you so distraught?”

“Because, I don’t feel bad about it. And that scares me. I do not want to be a savage, who kills without remorse. It terrifies me to think that I could kill a man and not feel anything about it.”

“Child, it is okay. The very fact that you are scared for that shows that you will be fine. Do not be scared of yourself. You are human, not a beast.”

“But”

“Child. You will be wild and untamed, it is who you are. But that fierceness does not make you a savage. Do not trick yourself into believing that.”

“But, father”

“Remember, child, you are a gift from the goddess. The person you are, is who you were meant to be. A remnant of the old religion. Where men once balanced on the edge of civilization. Do not fear yourself. Understand who you are and who you are meant to be. Do not be scared of your potential"
Wild Woman by kaelycea
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Bibliography: "Splinter-Foot-Girl" Tales of the North American Indians by Stith Thompson: Source 

Authors Note: To be honest, this mostly for me to attempt to write the dreaded dialogue. Most of the story wrote itself and took me along for the ride. Parts of this story align closely with the original- like how the girl was born and raised, but all the rest are very lose interpretations. In the original the girl marries a bull then runs away and is helped by trees and other animals. I just wanted the girl be curious and independent. I think I managed to get that through. 

Tuesday, March 28, 2017

Reading Notes:Native American Marriage Tales, Part B

Dog Husband
Now, how can i make this really dark? Oh mother raises her children to take revenge on the village that shunned her for her rape-rape that could have been by some mechanics of the gods. Basically she raises her own army. Before then all the canines in the area were dogs-the village had killed off the wolves. Her children become wolves because they were raised savage and not by man kind. The children end up killing and eating the village as a warning from the gods to leave nature as it should be.

True Bride
nope- I want her to give birth to real animals and several more than the story-but I want them each to have the ability to turn into humans with another special characteristic. The mother gets lock away-but the husband continues to lie with her in hopes that she will eventfully conceive a good son, and that all her children-no matter how beastal, are useful to him. The children are treated well, and so is the mother despite her confinement. Step mother gets angry and decides to kill the mother, but the children each find a way to thrath her plan. The last child is born and grows up-ends up being the one to kill the stepmother and free his mother. Mother marries someone else and gives birth to a human pup- who chooses to become like his siblings- they all become gods in the end.

Mother of Wolves by MD-Arts
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Bibliography: Tales of the North American Indians by Stith Thompson: Source 

Monday, March 27, 2017

Reading Notes: Native American Marriage Tales, Part A

Pipued Buffalo Wife
Princess and the frog crossed with the Minotaur
I what the man to stay dead- change the entire plot into a revenge story of the mother for taking advantage of her. Make the man fall in love with her then take that love away-when he comes to reclaim his family trick him into believing his son was helping but instead give him false hope. Make it really dark an depressing-revenge is best served cold plan

Splinter-Foot Girl
Story of the wild girl- foot stuck child- and her savage beauty. How graceful and fierce she is. Could be a story of her growing up in the on the edge of the wild asking why she is so different then other people. I want her to save herself- she kills the bull-perhaps out of need or by accident-but not because of hate-I want her to be a woman on the edge of civilization-who has nature bow to her whim. But not as an nymph or sorceress-but as someone at ease in the wild. or maybe she left of her own accord-not understanding marriage then when the bull chased her she killed him. I want her to be strong and independent- but slightly off in her reactions and understandings of the human world.

Eagle and Whale Husbands
 two sisters abandoned in the forest. They fall asleep together but awaken in different  places- one in the heights one on the coast- each taken by two different men. The girls grow up separated but always yearning for one another company. Well cared for and educated. They eventually die and become spirits of the wind- an ocean breeze and the warm breeze. Finally they reunite on the coast as a hurricane.

Wind Elemental by HoiHoiSan
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Bibliography: Tales of the North American Indians by Stith Thompson: Source 


Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Storytelling Week 9: Raven's Lament

They say the world is like a painter’s canvas, blank and empty, awaiting an artist touch to bring out the beauty calling from its expanse. This could not be truer than the world at its beginning. Then, the ground was only white where it was cold and brown where it was warm. The sun and moon shown upon an empty flat world. There was no life. However, it was world balanced on the edge of a blade, awaiting the right touch to fall into either absolute desolation or incomprehensible beauty. The day came where the world shifted, changing from its static circumstance just slightly enough. In the gaze of the moonlight formed a creature of shadows. It was like an ink dot upon unblemished parchment. Its feathers glimmered iridescent, throwing off colors not yet seen upon the world until then: blues, purples, and shimmering greens. Here was the raven, the first life upon an awaiting world.

As the raven took flight, he noticed there was nothing but flat empty expanse around him. It mattered not how long or far he flew. The only change was the shifting of brown to white upon the flat ground. After a time, the novelty of life wore off, and the raven decided to change its surroundings, he shifted into a form that allowed him to mold the world as he pleased. Then, he took up the earth and began to mold them into hills and mountains. He created great peaks and gentle hills, and where he took from the earth, ravines and canyons formed. As he continued his self-appointed tasks, water began to pool where previously it had only run unimpeded, turning into lakes and oceans. When the raven saw this, he was amazed, for he did not know that the rain that fell from the sky bright color beyond that of the sky. Now, the world was no longer flat, but the raven was still not pleased.

He saw the pale blues and soft greens the water had brought to the world. He sought to bring more color to the earth aside from that of the sky and of the ground. He started near the oceans. There he tore up the sand into fine particles where they were bleached by the sun, turning pale yellow. Then he went to the canyon. There at sunset each day, he took the colors of the falling star and painted them onto the side of the walls. He stole pieces from the rainbow and planted them into the ground, and there formed gems of every shade. Still, the raven was not satisfied. He went out and made grass grow upon the empty plains. Fauna that waved in the winds with colors from amber to emerald green. He shaped wild flowers of every species, from those that shown yellow to those that warned away with gleaming red. Even then, the raven was restless. His world was still incomplete. He continued to create. From his mind spouted great trees and creeping vines.

It is from one of this vines, that the world shifted once more. One vine continued to grow beyond what the raven expected or indeed knew, for he was busy elsewhere. As the vine reached maturity, a man stepped out from its bursting seeds. Curious, he began to explore the vibrant world in which he had been born. It took many days for the raven to return to this corner of the world, but when he did, he was greeted with the sight of man. curious the raven alighted in front of him and asked,

“Who are you?”

Raven by DoodleWithGlueGun
DeviantArt
Bibliography: Myths and Legends of Alaska, edited by Katharine Berry Judson (1911): source

Author's Note: I was inspired to write this story by the raven story about creation. I wanted to know what it was like for the raven before man sprouted from the vine. Granted in the original the raven had not created mountains  until later, or many other things that I attribute to him. It was interesting to me that the raven had such power of creation, but it took until man came out that he began to make animals. I suppose in my mind he did not know he could, because he was not aware that anything could work that way, he does not see himself as a animal but a part of the world.   

Monday, March 20, 2017

Reading Notes: Alaskan Legends, Part B

The first woman
I would prefer this story not to cumulate with the rending of a woman into multiple parts and thus killing her. It would be more interesting for men to fight over her in battle or make it into a similar situation as Solomon and the two woman- with the one who loves her the most sis willing to giver her up to deep her alive . It would also be interesting if she were a goddess who ends up making two separate women based on what the men valued the most-dancing or stitching to each.

 Land of the dead
reminds me of Dante's Inferno- people are punished in similar forms of the sin and those who they met or inspired by in life are
guides upon the path. It would be interesting to make a path for myself or a beloved character and see where they end up in the path of the dead-like harry potter seeing Voldemort having seven different punishments happening at the same time or Bella being tormented incessantly

Which Way by Mike Coates
public domain pictures 
Bibliography:Myths and Legends of Alaska, edited by Katharine Berry Judson (1911): source


Reading Notes: Alaskan Legends, Part A

Raven Myth
Aspects i want to keep: ability to transform into a man, association with shadows, ability to create living beings, making things to balance out human deeds, and so add to the bland world

possible story: raven sprang from shadows in a fully formed world-but it was like a blank canvas in a way- as he lived in the snowing north- and he began to create color to fill it- men still sprung from the seeds of his plants- he was lonely before man appeared- first words are "who are you"-
I want the mood to be dismal but beautiful
adding colors like brown or green or reds and pinks of flowers- colorful driftwood fire

another one i could write is how the raven is seeing the world today- and his despair at the ignorance of humans and how he has no more power to changed the world because his power came from the blank canvas of the world and we have used it all up with our own decorations or he is gradually corrupted by men -no longer caring as much for nature and slowly becoming more savage and less kindly- all his care for nature vanishes

or how he left Alaska and went to Australian having given up on the men of the tundra- and that is why there are all the weird animals down there- because he was trying to make a place where the animals would be safe from men who hunted them

Fantasy Raven by arnevierlinger
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Bibliography:Myths and Legends of Alaska, edited by Katharine Berry Judson (1911): source 


Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Week 8 Growth Mindset

Two of my classes this semester have been pushing me further then ever in how I think about writing, not just creative writing but just writing in general. This class and Latin. With this class, I do not have the time to take my writings to several different people and have them go over and edit it. I have had to rely on myself. Latin has taught me so much about English surprisingly enough. Because of Latin, I now know what passive voice is, and how much I enjoy abusing it.

There are definitely things I still need to push myself on. I shy away from dialogue. I my mind I relate that so something akin to the plague. I need to force myself to sit down in class and comprehend texts, for more then just writing a story, rather than  relying on my classmates or teachers to explain it for me. I also need to push myself to go out and talk to others instead of hiding away in my room and doing homework all day.

This class has defiantly enabled me to feel more comfortable approaching difficult or taboo topics in a friendly way, like cannibalism or sexism. It has also allowed me to gain confidence in my creative side, something that I have always been wary of before. It is also a wonderful class for self-motivation, with out increasing that I may have given up on this class early on.

Hopefully later this semester, I can give myself enough confidence to tackle dialogue! At the same time I hope I can push myself further in other classes, especially those that I am bored in.

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Week 8 Reflections

It has been really fascinating to read the stories from all around the world. When choosing my stories, I have been trying to find ones that I have never heard about before in my main readings then familiar ones for my extra credit. The only thing that I have disappointed myself with is that I ended up not reading anything from Africa. Looking at my reading notes, I am not sure if they would be productive for anyone other then myself, and they definitely would not help a person who has not read the stories in question, as they give no hint of the original plot most of the time. The train of thought jumps around and trails off, most of the sentences are riddled with grammatical errors. The good thing is it follows my train of though, and gives me enough to wright new stories. That is what is important after all.

I am very happy with all of my stories bar one. I feel as if my stories reflect me as a writer and me as a person. I believe in very present, emotive, and immersive stories and my writing reflects that. The only one I am disappointed in is A Day in the Life of Gods. Even though it is a good story I think it showcases my weakness in writing. I dread dialogue, and will do everything in my power to avoid writing it. It so happens that that is exactly what I love the most about other peoples stories. So many of my fellow classmates can write dialogue, and they are amazing at it, and it makes me envious of that ability. Conversely, I feel like they end up missing part of the stories because they focus on the dialogue so much that there is not space for descriptions or support. To much dialogue and the story feels superficial.Oh well, maybe I should stop shying away from the dreaded conversation.

Quote by Edger Allen Poe
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Monday, February 27, 2017

Reading Notes: Tibetan Folk Tales, Part B

How the Rabbit Killed the Lion
Oh, I want to rewrite this on so that there really is a she-devil. So the rabbit reluctantly goes to pay his respects but meets the she-devil on the way. She asks what has him so down and he explains. Then together they plot a way to rid themselves of the lion. The poor lion still drowns but not because he jumped after his own reflection but because he jumped into to the stream to confront the she devil and drowned because he could not swim.

How the Raven Saved the Hunter
No, now I want the bird to live. Perhaps he just injured the bird. And then he found it later and nursed it back to health? Or I could do a story about how the gods took mercy on the bird and changed into human shape. The hunter comes back to bury the bird but instead find the body of a beautiful woman,injured in the same way as the bird. He then nurses her back to health and they eventually marry or he becomes something like a father fig. The bird is wise and beautiful and brings great prosper to the hunter.

The Two Little Cats
How did the cats get found by the Handre in the first place. I propose that he was waiting and one of the cats god injured on the way home. He follow the blood trail and say the cats trying fix the injury. Either he frightened them and they over reacted or he tried to help them and they were terrified of his appearance. It would be interesting if he was perusing them the entire time because he wanted to help them. In this the death of the Handre would be sad because he as not being evil but his frighting appearance doomed him. Maybe the cats are punished because of this misdeed so they no longer can taste salt?
Raven that Saved the Hunter
Birds of America by John Audubon
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Bibliography- Tibetan Folk Tales by Albert Shelton: online source

Monday, February 20, 2017

Storytelling Week 7: Eternal Beauty

Thousands of people come and visit her every year. She is a figure of awe and inspiration across generations. Everyone who has looked upon her face claims that they have seen the face of divinity. She has been here for centuries, no one remembers her past or her name, but legends have sprung up around her. There are tales, about how she must have saved the world, how she tricked the gods, or enchanted men with her beauty, and other such fanciful quests. Despite all this reverence, she is simply a beautiful corpse, there is no life in her lungs, no glimmer of mischief in her eyes, no flush of blood lies in her cheek. All the devotions and prayers in the universe will not change that she is simply a lifeless husk preserved in crystalline tomb. Nor will it change the truth, that all the stories about this nameless beauty are all wrong.
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Let us call this poor woman Princess Shītǐ. She was the only daughter of a wealthy king. When she was born, Shītǐ was graced with two things. The first being otherworldly beauty. Her skin was as pale as alabaster, her hair was darker then pitch with glimmers of raven within, and her eyes glimmered like liquid silver. She was perfect in every way, except one. Shītǐ was cursed. She had never ending bad luck. She would often be wounded in the most bizarre of circumstances and would narrowly escape death. Though she was quite intelligent she often made foolish mistakes that cost her dearly.

When Shītǐ was old enough, her father decided it was time for her to marry. She was to throw a bouquet of flowers over her shoulders and whoever caught it would be her husband. As she was walking down the path, she saw a young beggar man, called Cáifù, who was blessed by luck. Thinking that his luck may counteract her own dismal one she tossed the flowers over her shoulder at him. After he had caught the flowers, Shītǐ's father came up and asked her why she had chosen a poor urchin rather than a handsome prince. When she told him, he went into a rage and banished her from his presence forever. Distraught, Shītǐ fled to her new husband. They lived for several years in a small hut on the edge of town, just barely avoiding poverty, until her husband left to seek his fortune. Cáifù promised to return just as soon as he had succeeded in guaranteeing them a happy life. With this noble thought in mind, he left Shītǐ there, forgetting that she had no one other than him.

Many years later Cáifù returned, now rich and prosperous. In his travels, he had become wealthy and admired. That once destitute man was an emperor in his own right. But he had returned to his bride too late. Poor Shītǐ, was dying. Her life had drained out of her limbs. Her once lustrous black hair had turned silver with stress and worry. Limbs that had held power, now looked as delicate as the brittle bones of a bird. Her skin no longer glowed with an inner light, instead it was like marble, cold and distant. Shītǐ was still a thing of beauty, even as she lay dying upon her bed, but was a changed beauty from human perfection to something otherworldly. Cáifù rushed to her bedside, frightened for her in her fragility. Either it be by his great luck or her disastrous misfortune or some morbid mix of the two, he had arrived just in time for his wife to take her final breath and depart the plane of men forever.

Distraught, Cáifù took his wife's body back to his palace. He spared no expense in preparing her body. He placed her upon a bed of silks. She lay there resplendent in the finest of fabrics and adored with valuable gems, cleaned and perfected by the midwives. There the body of Shītǐ lays today, encased in transparent crystal for eternity. As for Miserable Cáifù, he went on to be a great ruler. Through his works, his people were able to overcome great battles and famines. His ingenuity brought his people into a new age where they thrived for generations afterward.

But no one remembers this. They only see the enchanting beauty of the woman and her misery. I guess it is true after all, time forgets everyone, it turns great men into memories and forgotten men into heroes.

Sleeping Beauty (Slightly Altered) by Charlie-Bowater
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Bibliography: Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhelm: online source

Authors note: This story is more of "what happens afterword" the changing the original tale. In the original the beggar turned thief finds his wife and they go to his palace together-everything else is pretty much faithful to the original (physical changes aside). Unfortunately, in the original the princess dies anyway, just 18 days later. I decided it would be more tragic if she died in his arms when he had come back for her, not that big of a change. The important thing of my story was the irony. The princess did absolutely noting to earn her 'fame', not in life and certainly not in death. One would think she would be forgotten. Instead, her husband, who did many things that he should be remembered by, was forgotten. On a side not their names do mean something. Cáifù means wealth and Shītǐ means corpse.

Sunday, February 19, 2017

Reading Notes: Chinese Fairy Tales, Part B

The Little Hunting Dog
I want it all to be the imagination of  a little  boy who has been grounded and is stuck in his room without any toys. So he sees the insects and imaginings up a war for them to fight. The challenge will be misleading my audience into thinking its an actual battle until the end. I also want it to one of those stories where if you reread it you catch all the hits from the description of the surroundings.
-floor grassy fields of lavender
-light-the sun
- blanket-cave system
-shoes- great rocks
-piles of laundry- mountains
- book- high mesa

Retribution
I would like to see the story from the water carries point of view. Like when he fell down the mountain and the old man left him to die. The vague feeling of movement and becoming a newborn. Then the feeling of growing up, knowing that something was strange about you, almost like you were someone else, or like a memory just out of reach.

Child Playing with Wooden toys
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Bibliography
- Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhelm: online source

Reading Notes: Chiness Fairy Tales, Part A

The Favorite of Fortune and the Child of Ill Luck
See, I am going to be really cruel here, just because I can. I am going to keep the entire first part of the story, just the way it is. Princess has bad luck-sees the beggar blessed by luck- marries beggar and is shunned by father- beggar goes to seek fortune and then returns to retake his bride. Only in my story- he comes back to find her body instead of her or comes back to find her at her last breath. Utterly heartbroken he takes he and preserves her body and has this elaborate funeral..thousands of years latter the man is forgotten and her body is worshiped as a goddess.  He was favored in life- and she in death.

The Cave of the Beasts
The daughters have to take the place of the wolf and fox as the protectors of the cave because they killed them- Daughters transform in to deities, beautiful and powerful. When the  father comes to take them they can only leave at night or they vanish into morning mist or perspective animals  until the next night. so they grow up somewhat wild.

Lady of the Moon
It would be interesting to look at the world from (Tscang O) the lady of the moon. To see how lonely she must be despite living in a palace make o star dust. Having to be someone who is doomed to forever listen and watch as everything from starstruck lover to crimes of passion happen beneath her rays-. So when the emperor appears he can feel the sadness lingering in the air. He enjoys the beauty but always feels slightly uneasy.

Ember Fox and Demon Wolf by Lady-Vossler
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Bibliography- Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhelm: online source